Three and Goldilocks

I have been learning to write complete sentences, add 

details, and change the beginnings of my sentences.

One summers day I was at home with my mum enjoying the lovely weather. I decided to go outside and play on my swing in my backyard. Our garden was full of flowers and I saw a butterfly flying near them. A fox came running past the garden came out of no way . I started to chase the  fox. then     looked  around the forest I was lost in the forest.  I saw a red balloon  fly there was a little house in the woods. I run to it I said anyone  home   I walked in. something smelled too delicious it was  porridge. I ate the big porridge it  is too  hot! for me . I ate  the medium one  it   was too much cold.I went too the little one it was just right for me .so I  went to the chair I sat  on  the big chair but it was too big for me.   the next chair was the medium one it was too cold I went to the little chair it was the the right good nice one.I went up to the bedroom there was a big bed that I jump on it was too much big. the medium one was to hot and cold the little one was the right. The bear was coming to their home the big bear said who ate  my one he was not happy the mum bear said who ate  my  one she was sad who ate my said the little bear he was so much sad and happy he was not having fun.

then they went to the chair who sat on my chair he was cross who sat on my chair said the mum she was so furious the little bear said some one sat my chair was not good . I am going up to the bedroom who was asleep on my bed who  sat  on my bed. But some one is on my bed .I run to home because the bear was looking at her I went home mum said come inside she said.