Thursday, 16 June 2016

Avengers Assemble!

KAPOW! BANG! BOOF!  The story start’s like this.It all started when Dead pool saw someone saying HELP. Dead pool jumped out of bed and jump into his uniform and ran out to the door but there was no sign of someone saying HELP. Dead pool did not make it in time.There was some lines from the wheels so Dead pool went to see where it went.The next day Dead pool went to go find were the wheels went to he started to walk then started to run he saw the car but it did not look like a car it was a van. Dead pool went after the van but there was no sign where they went.  He saw a garage. Dead pool wanted to know what was in there but before he went to attack the garage he saw joker and his friends that were the me that  kidnap people. Dead pool jumped on to the bin Behind The garage and onto the garage.Then he shots to of the bad guys that were standing next to the garage.He jumped down and Talk out the bad guys.But Joker was next he How laugh with a big smile on his face saying well well well look who we have here. Dead pool went after Joker  BANG! BOOF!  KAPOW!   Joker was now behind bars for kidnap. The Day was saved from Dead pool.                                                         
                                                               THE END

WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind.

1 comment:

  1. Nice work Aneelis

    I really like how you started (Kapow Bang Boof) on your writing it was like I wanted to read more. Keep up the good work:)